7.2.06

The Show!

Coming soon?

9 comments:

the doodlers said...

hmmm. i must a missed the joke here. Are you just a funnin' about the backstory cuz that is really TOO sad!!

LOVE the look of this pitch!! However, the text might need a direction shift away from Dad being dead. But that's just me.- Arna

ridd1 said...

Thanks. No funnin' here. That's the story and we're stickin' to it.

the doodlers said...

Hey Ridd! Thanks for that clarification. So it's kinda like Freddy's dad saved the animals from being crispy critters. Like the cereal?
Seriously, tho, this show idea looks amazing. Kids don't really need to know how Freddy got to be who he is. They'll just want to ride that firetruck with him!

ridd1 said...

Yeah it's like the whole Spider-man thing - how Peter Parker vows to fight crime after someone very close to him dies because of it. It reads a little heavy here for the 5-10 age group maybe, but if scripted right I think it'll be fine. It'll be interesting see what the network bigshots think. Regardless, I just started writing the book now just for kicks. That's going to happen for sure!

Tyler said...

Hey Ridd, This looks awesome, very appealing layout. I have to agree with the doodlers that it's a bit heavy but i like it. You may run into problems with showing any kind of fire, ask paku about how many rules he had to follow just to show a kid taking a bath. That all being said its a brilliant concept with fantastic art, can't imagine it not attracting some attention from the bigshots.

Miah Alcorn said...

Looks great to me Ridd! Great concept, strong design, and a simple, but really interesting story. With something like this, show possiblities are endless. I don't see how you can go wrong. Good luck with it and keep that great work comin'.

Wynne Chen said...

It's so cute with great design.
Looking forward to it!

Jav said...

looks good...
whens it start?

SteveLambe said...

Looks kickass. Heck...if the show doesnt work...do a book! I'd love to see a kid's book like this.